I’m a little torn about what to do when this chapter ends. Part of me wants to start afresh with a new chapter and a new story, and part of me wants to go back and insert a page or two into each of the chapters we’ve had so far first. Specifically:
- A scene between Saffron fighting the crab and finding the frog princess in chapter 1, which is very jarring currently
- A scene at the end of chapter two with the team all getting to know each other
- A scene between Saffron and Botoxica early in Chapter 3 to better set up why Botoxica’s seems to personally hate Saffron.
I don’t think this story has gone off the rails or anything extreme like that, but I also think the train is moving a bit too fast.
What do y’all think?
3 thoughts on “Dressed to kill”
hjr
Filling in some story would be great, though I am looking forward to continuing the story.
On a completely different subject, what’s up with Legend of the Hare?
Daniel Kelly
I accidentally deleted the Legend of the Hare site because I forgot lothcomic.com was a mirror of subdomain on saffroncomic.com, and deleted that subdomain. It’s back up now but it’ll be a day or two before the kinks are ironed out.
Legend of the Hare is likely to come back early next year, and Carlos is currently working on a short LotH story scheduled to be in volume 3 of the Threads anthology series from SpiderForest
p0indexterous
The team getting to know each other.
A little backstory would be great!